Friday, June 21, 2013

Third Times A Charm

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My first weekend Trifecta Challenge! The challenge is to use 33 words to describe the saying "Third time's the charm". This was fun!



Toxic land near and far,

Dead planet decayed with

Life no more.

 

Intergalactic travelling,

Probes sent to study

What once used to be.

 

Complete serenity.

After our fighting world

Fought war number three.



12 comments:

  1. Oh wow. I'm glad you resubmitted this. Fantastic job and a warm welcome to Trifecta! Thanks for linking up.

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    1. Thanks, I'm eager to learn more and happy to have new friends through Trifecta!

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  2. You did an awesome job with this for your first weekend challenge!

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    1. Hey, thanks a mint! I've really been psyched about this new venture.

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  3. Nice job with the prompt! You tell a great story in just 33 words. Well done!

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    1. The words fly by quickly, but so much, really, can be said with very few words. Thanks for your comment Suzanne!

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  4. It does make me wonder if anything would be left if WW III should happen.

    Welcome to Trifecta!

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    1. I truly feel welcomed!

      Thanks for your comment, glad I filled your imagination with wonder.

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  5. Sci-Fi poetry...
    Cool!
    Great imagery too.

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  6. Very well written piece. Very thought provoking.

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    1. To provoke a thought is to move the spirit. Thank you quest4peas.

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