We want you to follow suit and give us a thirty-three word piece that has a color in it. Use the color to describe anything you like, or use anything you like to describe your color, but keep it creative and keep it short.
My Submission:
In deep darkness of early morning skies
Vivid blue eyes glitter periwinkle
In moonlights shine.
Sparkling facets, I love you
My important question, long over-due.
I love periwinkle too! Really nice piece--very sweet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, it is a good color!
DeletePeriwinkle is such a great color, and this is such a happy little piece.
ReplyDeleteOh Happy Day ! Thanks Draug :)
Delete"In deep darkness of early morning skies"--I love this description.
ReplyDeleteI wrote this poem when I woke way too early in the morning, such a great time of the earth's daily cycle. I'm glad you noticed the line :)
DeleteLoved this and absolutely loved that last line! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda! Decided to weave my color into a love poem. The last line had a much more lovely ending, 'No' would have been sad ;)
DeleteShawn, this is absolutely gorgeous! I'm a little bit aflutter, myself! Perfect 33 words!
ReplyDeleteValerie, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Thought I should bring a tad bit of romanticism to one of my submissions. I'm relieved that you were "a little bit aflutter" and not overly aflutter, that would surely be an uncomfortable feeling :) I always dig your replies!
DeleteThis is sweet. I like Periwinkle, too. (It was one of my favorites in the big boxes of Crayola crayons...I also liked the way it sounds :))
ReplyDeleteIt is a fun word and reminds me of fairies and pixies. Thank you for commenting!
DeleteThe opening line is my favourite. The rest is very effective too!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gabriella :)
DeleteAn answer to an overdue question comes with a fine, per book, per day.
ReplyDeleteA fine comment from a possible Zorlack! Thank you
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