Trifecta: Week Eighty-Six "CRACK"
****In the Restaurant Industry, which I worked for many years, when an item is unavailable, sold out or unordered, it is "Eight-Sixed".
I had wondered where in the world that term came from and I found the eerie answer online: On a pirates ship, there was room for only Eighty-Five crewmembers. If you were the eighty-sixth, you had to walk the plank. Yikes!****
This week we have a new set of guest judges. Please help us welcome
Mary Beth,
Shreya and
Yve. They've got a
big responsibility this week, and we are confident that they're going to do an
awesome job.
CRACK1a : a loud roll or peal <a crack of
thunder>
b : a sudden sharp noise <the crack of rifle fire>
2:
a sharp witty remark : quip
3a : a
narrow break : fissure <a crack in the ice> b : a
narrow opening <leave the door open a crack><cracks between
floorboards> —used figuratively in phrases like fall through the cracks to
describe one that has been improperly or inadvertently ignored or left out <a
player who fell through the cracks in the college draft> <children
slipping through the cracks of available youth services>4a : a
weakness or flaw caused by decay, age, or deficiency :unsoundness
b : a
broken tone of the voice
c : crackpot
5: moment, instant <the crack
of dawn>
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MY SUBMISSION: (333 Word Count)
Friction caressed the long-necked vessel revealing a misty
wayfarer.
“I possess to you tri-wishes this nigh, do with them what you
will.”
Provided with a faint moment, the smoky apparition vacuumed,
toe first, into its home.
Wild with wonder and full with hope, the final thrift store shopper
of the day, unwrinkled a five dollar bill that was stuffed deep in his barren
pocket and paid the nominal price.
“I can wrap it in paper to protect it, if you want” said the
clerk to the crazed man.
“No that won’t be necessary, I’d like to hold it near me, if
that’s alright.” he said and picked up his treasure, gently placing it between
his rib cage and arm and walked with it out of the door.
“I wish for a silver Maserati” he spoke clearly.
In an instant the car appeared and he opened the door and
sat in the luxurious leather front seat.
“I wish I had my own island.” He voiced his second desire.
Sitting in his new vehicle, he appeared suddenly on a beautiful
black sand beach, white-crested waves crashing into the shore.
He opened the car door and stepped onto the beach, still
clutching his magic jar. He walked to a cove shaded with palm trees and sat
upon a rock. The excitement had brought with it a tiresome lull and within
minutes, he was fast asleep. Awakened by a noisy flock of passing gulls, he pulled
himself together and grabbed for his bottle, which, at this point had slipped
from his hands, landing on the rocky ground. He picked it up, discovering that
it now had a hair-line crack across the neck and where it had landed, was moist
with liquid.
His daily third wish for his normal previous life were not
heard, nor granted, all the rest of the years of his life. He rubbed and rubbed
until his life had finally succumbed to his first wishes. He crawled into his
luxurious casket and died.